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Well, a bit of the script from the original short, Passage to K’veer, has made its way into the script for the feature. It’s pretty much just the beginning few pages of a much longer scene. Funny how something we had first penned years ago - a fragment - has become part of the whole. It’s nice to know that our vision from the early days has held up and withstood the test of time.
http://mystmovie.com/materials/passage.pdf
It’s a silly little scene ![]()
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Apr 08 2008
w00t! I loved it! The flirtatious banter between Veovis and the girl is quite amusing, and I think faithful to Veovis’ character. Aitrus’ final zinger wraps it up nicely, I think. The whole scene strikes me an accurate protrayal of the friendship of the two men, as well as an effective set-up of perhaps more serious dicussion to follow?
I very much like the tone of this. If this is an indication of the quality of your work, then I am very pleased and encouraged! Keep up the great work.